Memoir
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This quarter for english our main focus was on Memoirs. The major assignment was creating our very own memoirs and making them story books. I created 4 memoirs that I arranged into a book. Each memoir taught me different lessons that I will never forget. I enjoyed creating this memoir because it let me tell the world about my experiences and I was also allowed to get VERY creative with my booklet. This is my best piece of work because is shows that I can re-tell my life in a story that will make it sound like an interesting story. I also like the play of shapes that I did in creating the book, making it look very sophisticated. The next time I do this I would like to improve the quality of my work. I would like to fix the vocabulary and grammer. I would also like to make the stories more interesting, changing the way I tell them to make them better.
What the note wrote:
Nadia,
The stories in your memoir are descriptive and entertaining. Your writing seems wordy rusty and wordy places. Try to be more concise with your word choice and planning the structure of your writing. Your conclusion is rushed and superficial. I hope to read more in-depth and meaningful conclusions in the future, keep up the good work!
The stories in your memoir are descriptive and entertaining. Your writing seems wordy rusty and wordy places. Try to be more concise with your word choice and planning the structure of your writing. Your conclusion is rushed and superficial. I hope to read more in-depth and meaningful conclusions in the future, keep up the good work!
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